Graphic Critic...

[neoMorph]

Hey,
This is something I made one night and I was wondering if anybody would just tell me what they think and maybe what to do to make it better...
I'm thinking of adding some chaings to the rusted part, or maybe making it a little more metal looking. I am going to make the text smaller though...

<A HREF="http://images.deviantart.com/large/wallpaper/wabstract/Worlds_Apart.jpg">Worlds Apart</A>

[Axiom]

well, the one thing that stands out to me is the typography...maybe some script type font...mix it up a bit. Also, play with the colors on the left to kindof lighten up between the black nuetral (negative, not neutral) spaces.

overall, its nice.

[waycooljr]

looks sharp. in my opinion i'd take the text on the left and overlay it in the color like you did on the right side. and i agree with Ob on the colors on the left.

like i said tho lookin sharp ( i like the poem too)