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May 4th 2005#168030 Report
Member since: Apr 19th 2005
Posts: 80
Here is the link to the banner I want to be critisized...
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May 4th 2005#168033 Report
Member since: May 4th 2005
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Overall its decent.

Im not quite sure the pyramid shaped thing in the center is. And Im also not sure about the glowing orbs, they seem very unrealistic.

All in all not bad. I think you'd benefit from making simpler, however.
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May 4th 2005#168034 Report
Member since: Apr 19th 2005
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Euh well in fact that "pyramid thing" is ment to be a floor floating in space... :D

Any sugestions for "simpler"?
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May 5th 2005#168063 Report
Member since: Jan 17th 2005
Posts: 147
Distort the skull to match the perspective or the rest of the letters.
Make the ords match to there holders more fluently.
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May 6th 2005#168086 Report
Member since: Jan 1st 1970
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To take that image to the next level, you need to become one with the dodge and burn tools. The text looks 'flat' in the image. Use dodge to add highlights in the middle of each bone and burn to add shadows along the sides to create a 3D feel to them.

A quick 2 min sample of what I mean:

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May 12th 2005#168173 Report
Member since: Apr 19th 2005
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Ok, thx u all A LOT for ur hints :D !!! This is what I got after editing a bit (I doged/ burned the letters, I gave bigger holders for the "fire-balls" and tried distorting the skull).

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May 16th 2005#168228 Report
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Great!! Lookin' better -n- better! Keep diggin' in, and find areas to improve.
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