cyborg girl

http://home.comcast.net/~chimeco/images/cyborg2.jpg

alright, it's been a week and no response which is making me nervous.
so allow me to simplify:

a. good
b. bad
c. seen it before
d. needs more work.

you had some colour choices before? i remember liking the black and white one.

it seems a bit random, like you took a bunch of futuristic elements and tacked them on.. lacks unity? maybe it could be simpler. i'm not sure i understand the scarred(?) eye or why that piece of glass/technology is lower than the eye - i think that's it, the cyborg parts don't seem logical, there's no reason for why things look the way they do, or why they're where they are - it's kind of superficial. i'm not saying the technological parts need to do or mean anything.. but it might help in terms of sophistication and believability (that a word?), that way the viewer can imagine how those added parts might function.