green ohm girl

i'm just beginng to learn to draw and paint simultaneously, and i realize this piece is riddled with anatomy errors... the eyes are way off, i dont like the way the lip turned out... i didnt use a reference for the cloth veil thing, so i apologize if it looks kinda funky. cloth is hard to paint.

i would like a harsh critique on composition, and any more subtle errors.

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Its the ultimate double chin!~ *runs for his life*


Seriously though, I think it needs more texture variation. Maybe more contrast. Its looking good though.