Very blah.

hehe...My friend told me to make a poster for a party that he is having on bar.
Remembered it about 1 hour before they needed it.
So yeah...blah...hihihi

http://www.3jorn.exocrew.com/images/poster.jpg

It's not that jagged and the text actually fits at the bottom but I croped it pretty badly.
..but they actually exepted it and printed it out on an A3 :P

pretty nice retro look. but to be picky, is there a yellow letter missing where i think it's supposed to say 2nd? also, the kurkiklubi white text at the top is a bit hard to read agains the lighter parts of the background. the rest is quite cool. nice fonts.

good job i love that font

lazy bjorn lol - fix the fonts haha

I like the hairdos and the colors - I'm in my "pink period"

i like pink on white and pink on black at the moment aswell

Looks good man. I really like the afros you got going on the the background those are awesome Nice work.

The figures are not distinct enough to distinguish them from the clutter of the rest of the design.

The font choices are fine but the implementation of them is inadequate to say the least. "Disco for demanding people" needs to be properly kerned to stop it running of the page to the right as it does now. Also as I see mentioned in a previous post, the (what I presume is a 2 for 2nd rather than a for and) needs making larger than the nd part of it, also in the same yellow or another tone.

As Mihai put it "lazy bjorn"...
Yeah the 2nd is pretty crap because the font didn't work with numbers and I was lazy and didn't have the time to fix it...
And as I said the disco for demanding people actually don't really look like that...
It does have space on the right side, but I just croped it really badly...
Will soon go to that party so I will see how it actually looked printed on an A3...

Printed versions.
http://www.3jorn.com/kurki.html
It got cut when it got printed too :(
And something went wrong with the font...but yeah...whaat evaaah :P