Time to start posting

Here is something I throguh together tonight because I was feelin a bit pissy, lemme know what you all think and what I might be able to add to it.

Mr.Milligan

http://www.umit.maine.edu/~Kurt_Milligan/spooky_3.jpg

Very nice photo manipulation there :D
I guess you're not in a very summer mood, with a horror image like that...
Well I think the eyes on the chick is coming out a bit too much from the rest of the piece...but otherwise great work...

I liked it until that face on the bottom. Doesnt quite fit. I would get rid of that and develop the rest of the photo. Maybe use the face for another pic. You got some nice things going on with the photos...the text..the colors. The composition isnt bad either.

As a tip...write down why you are pissy. Then write down things related to why you are pissy. Dont try hard...just whatever words/ideas pop into your head....write them down. Then select something (think about it more if needed) and try to work whatever it is that represents that idea into the image. It maybe a photo...a phrase...a couple words anything.

Like that text on the side...did you write it yourself/does it have meaning. If it does than that would be something to expand on.
Just some suggestions. Nice start!

Thanks for the great comments, the text is in fact something I wrote and put in there with personal meaning. The eyes do seem to stand out a bit much for the rest of the image, and the composition seems to be a bit too linear. Hrmm... well its my first post here so I will keep working :-) thanks again

Mr.Milligan

its good i just dont liek the eyes, lol

pretty um.... interesting :P

Im not really sure I understand the entire meaning behind the piece, but it looks alright :P

I think the girl (it's a girl with lemon eyes! ;)) would look a lot creepier, if you gave her cheeks a more naturalish look (like on her forehead), and her right ear looks too blured.
I like it though, it's dark, and almost 'grungy'. Goodjob.

good golly miss molly that is one scary picture