Fashion

hey, again..

just uploaded another piece.. called 'fashion'
Fashion

and again, fire away

That is nice, but blur the shine on the pens.

Anyway, when I saw it was called fashion I thought "oh no!", but I was very pleased, mmm... picture.

very nice - I like the ethereal feel of the models...very becoming
and I don't think the fountain pens' lights should be blurred - they are rigid objects not organic - a shadow or a lighted spot with well defined edges is ok

should be make some background.

that's cool
I'd maybe skip the gradient in the BG tho, and just leave it full white?
oh, and there's some weird shizz in the left side....(the darker blur that goes out of the borders)
But yeah, it's nice.

made a few changes.. wasnt sure about the white background at first, therefore i made the gradient..

now i removed id and removed the dark errors Paavo mention..

thx guys