Comic Coloring

Another page I colored for the comic "Su-Shi" we have issue # 3 on the way if anyone is interested, you can read it in the comics section at Rapturepress.com. I didn't sketch it, just colored / shaded it / added effects.


http://www.rapturepress.com/comics/newdraw/Out/test-003_50percent.jpg


Edit: Page 4:
http://www.rapturepress.com/comics/newdraw/Out/test-004_50percent.jpg

the shading is quite good but for the second picture, i don't think a blur will be enough to show the impact of the punch...maybe you can try adding some action lines?

yeayeayeayeyayeay action lines YAHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
*slaps meself*
*notes "meself" *

ok back to reality (eminem)
hmmm, looks nice,but the blur ain't anough to show the impact.

We're going to be adding some action lines. Thx for the feedback.

I think it looks good other then the blurry arm part... its kindof hard to show action like, maybe just some action lines like the others said...

But it looks good so far.. :D

the background is too empty and boring... and who are we?

we have issue
We're going to be adding some...

i dont like the actual drawings but the colorings alright