better ??

Well I've been working since last night. Changed a few things around and went back to a somewhat organic feel... I love the sphere but I've done that to death already. This is NOT done but you should get somewhat of a flow. Honesty only please. I think this is better than what I was working on. You guys be my third eyes if you have a sec. Let the page load all the way. Thinks it about 103k so far...

http://www.pankpages.com/p4/beta2.htm

Hey!, I really like the organic looking thing to the right!

I think moving the little icons up against the things on the left really helped my eye from getting drawn out of the design.

Is the only button on that page "home"... I mean I know it isn't finished, but I wanted to make sure I was seeing everything that was there.

Thanks, I appreciate that No there will be 5 buttons. I just put one on the flash page so I could check the motion. If you look close you will see there is also an "outline" around the vine that fades in and out. Subtle, but it's there. Still have a "long" waaaay to go but I'm getting the groove back. I hope. Anyway I've been switching between the old one and this one and "I" like this look a little better. And once there is more to look at hopefully it will fill in nicely...

Have you thought about making the vine come out over the orange just above the text there on the right?... I was just looking at it and I think that would really add some depth.

Hmmmm, I didn't do that but I tried making the area (orange area) right above the time (that small slit) semi-transparent like the left side is in the blue area. And that looked pretty good... Thanks...

Just re-upped it with that change. So if it looks the same "shift+refresh" to clear out the old .swf cache...

yeah, that does make it more interesting....

got another version yet?....

I wanna see!

No, didn't touch it tonight ;)

Where's Dek. He must not like it

LOL, you might be right... he hasn't commented

I do think that one is better. The little nav thing is cooler. And I like the organic look a lot better. I love organic looks. I think you will really have something if you add a ton of little details like that one little line that flips by on the nav, and the pulsating glow of the vine thing.