How are these?

Hello everybody, I was just wondering which of these layouts you guys think I should use. Critique much needed. Thankyou for your time!

1st one
2nd one

gratis..

p.s. I would call these drafts, I am still going to change them around a bit.

both really good, i like the 2nd one, the way everything is translucent is cool, maybe the text on the left should be a script font? yours to change :D

sweet

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I like them both, but the second one is smoother

I like the first, but maybe you should try fix the text a bit so it doesn't stick so close to the right (In the textboxes).....

they are both nice, but i like the second one best. nice

as everyone else said. any of the two will work great, i like number one a bit more though

yeah a agree with the above posts... #2 is the better layout IMO... but they are both pretty sweet... nice work...

they are both great!!!
good work....
my scale leans a little more to #2 but either on go's great....
i look forward to see more from you

PrOpS

I prefer the 2nd one too. It may be too dense though. The gray " L " corners of the little content boxes bug me but I can appreciate them because if you stand back they round off the corners of the boxes and it looks kinda cool.