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I just need some feedback for my new site; I wanted to make a site solely on spontaneity, so here's my attempt.


http://members.fortunecity.com/ezstud04/

Anything is appreciated, thanks.

On the splash page the scrollbar colors are too dark and don't go too well. Plus you have a 370 K splash image. You either should compress it a lot or change the image.

You have a really good start though on the main layout. The typography could use some work. Don't use the cursive fonts unless all your other fonts are cursive. It just doesn't look right. And then where you have a bunch of circles connected by a line, I would try to make the circles look more 3d.

Other than that, good job and I'm sure you will have an awesome site.

really busy, and seems very random, yea poor text and i hate popups escpecially those 248209843 ads:(

Yeah, I agree with the text change, i need heavy compression, and that I probably need to make those molecules more 3dish. I'm going to remove the dreams text anyway, since it has nothing to do with the site anymore. What text font do you think I should use?


The sites design however is suppose to be random and busy, yet to look decent somehow. I like the layout and I don't think I'm going to do much changing to the busyness of it. Oh and no doubt that I need a new host.

any more suggestions folks?

Make the popup resizeable. With dual-monitors/IE 6/Win 2K, the Javascript code pops up your site at half the width it should be, and there's no way to adjust it.

Viewing at 1024x768, I have to scroll down to see the "Click to Enter" link. Just make the splash image clickable and people will get the idea.

I think you're using too many links. You have an "About Me" and a "Bio" section as well as links labeled "Portfolio" and "Gallery". To me they are the same thing. Portfolio and gallery are interchangeable and anything in "About Me" can just as easily be placed under "Bio".

Cool one comment tho, i don't like the text color too dark for the background as if it mixes with the bg that seems unreadable esp. to me with 50/25 vision.