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Jun 6th 2002 | #51929 Report |
Member since: May 8th 2002 Posts: 66 |
this is a site im doing for a san francisco street preformer its about 70% tell me what you think about it www.sstapdancin.cjb.net and if you havent check out my site www.cosmoeonelabs.cjb.net :D |
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Jun 6th 2002 | #51939 Report |
Member since: Aug 4th 2001 Posts: 134 |
Regarding the first one, really liked it. Simple and concise. However, try to allow more space for content instead of the image on the left. Just my 2 cents worth... |
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Jun 7th 2002 | #52019 Report |
Member since: Sep 6th 2001 Posts: 3893 |
I think the its pretty good....i like how the first one is nice and simple but still has alot of designing taste to it....and as for your site im not sure i like it to much...its just kinda cut off at higher resolutions like mine **1280x1024** but its a good concept...
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Jun 7th 2002 | #52034 Report |
Member since: Aug 28th 2001 Posts: 970 |
It seems like I'm always the one to like the other. I live about 30 miles from S.F and I'd say number 2 fits the street preformer scene alot better than 1. Just from what I've observed from around town I just get this S.F vibe from the second one.
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Jun 7th 2002 | #52035 Report |
Member since: Aug 28th 2001 Posts: 970 |
I'd like to add however that I don't think the font you used for the second one works well though. It's hard for me to read and I don't think it goes with everything that you have there.
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Jun 7th 2002 | #52053 Report |
Member since: Mar 28th 2001 Posts: 1109 |
time for an old-school charm critique... i like it a lot! here is why: -nice colors! -love the large photo on the homepage (is that actually him or is it stock art? A++ to you if it is actually him!) -love the newspapers on the 'in news' page -seems like 90% of the sites posted here are people's personal design sites. it is refreshing to see something that is actually interesting and different! here is what i would change... -size your images in the html. i didn't view source, but it doesn't appear that you have. (getting the annoying jumpy effect as the page loads) -are you using image ready? don't. cut it up by hand. this thing is overly complex for no reason. -build the pages to expand. the photo on the 'about' page is breaking up. the articles are annoying to read/print because the user has to keep hitting next, next, next, next. web pages are made to scroll. every single page does not have to be above the fold. overall i like it! it could stand to be cleaned up a bit. |
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