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Monument - Comments so far?

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May 27th 2002#50231 Report
Member since: Mar 20th 2001
Posts: 671
Hi folks

I'm building a site for my band and I have made a first strike at it. Tell me what you think so far. Does it suck? Is it good enough or what? Any comments are appreciated. I intend to keep it simple and clean....

URL: http://synvinkel.net/monument/index2.shtml

// Nanne
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May 27th 2002#50250 Report
Member since: Aug 9th 2001
Posts: 2333
hey Nanne!

wow, long time no see. About the site..

(you've got a typo on the first line on the right (therefor))

I like the design. It's very nice and simple, unique layout idea.

The only thing i would definitely look into would be the text in the nav, it's a bit hard to see, and bit squashed. But other than this, i really like it!
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May 27th 2002#50253 Report
Member since: May 14th 2002
Posts: 285
I'd like to see the whole Monument logo/title bigger. Since it's not placed at the top, it needs just a hair more focus drawn to it. It looks good, but I'd bet it would kick it up notch if it were just bigger and more in your face.

Also in 800x600, the "links" button is getting cut off. At least here at work where I am looking at it.

Other than that, it's a nice clean layout with a cool little color scheme.

Good work.
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May 27th 2002#50254 Report
Member since: Jun 20th 2001
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i like the colors and logo and how you have the nav set up even tho its kind of random... very clean, good job
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May 27th 2002#50278 Report
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Well I set the menu up kinda random, but I thought to myself that hey.......It will probably be obvious for the visitor what the heck they should do....

About the typo.......I will change that. Sorry for my poor english....I'm swedish ya know......

As it is a first version, I will consider all options and try something else out too. THanx for the comments.......Please don't stop.......
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May 27th 2002#50283 Report
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Maybe another font in the menu?
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May 27th 2002#50293 Report
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definitely, try to find a font matching the band. perhaps a gothic font?
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May 28th 2002#50317 Report
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Got another one going now....Updated the logo aswell........So good so what?
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May 28th 2002#50371 Report
Member since: Aug 10th 2001
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Cool layout...

I really like how you played arond with images and background... very original...

Nice effect for the logo... I hope yu sections will be as cool as the main page!
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May 28th 2002#50375 Report
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Bingo!

Love the goth font, love the logo, great work Nanne!
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