Before/After

i dont like either.

yeah "after" is kinda better
but I never saw computer site with black background before :(

well.. could be worse! could have an orange background :P

O NO YOU DID NOT.

:p

I'll give my noobie 2 cents on this one...

Yes it's better, but it's still lacking. Everything seems to be equal on the page with no real focus, organization or contrast of elements. Nothing in particular grabs your attention. It's like the name of the business is of the same importance as the fact that a misc. hardware catagory exists. Maybe it's just too much textual content for one page? I'd like to see a more distinct company identifier and skip the "about us" stuff for that page-make a link to it so it's not so cluttered. Maybe a brief company mission statement instead of the location/contact info and then you'd have more focus on the various catagories of stuff for sale.

There's no question that your work is an improvement, but in my noobie opinion you could simplify it and contrast it just a bit to make it more appealing.

Dave Fore

whoa..
shot down by the noobie ;|
its worse than

moochan: i dont like either.

..
thanks for points tho I do agree
but I wanted to keep it to just one page
so I used lil sections..

my opinion was consise and straight to the point

i might not like it because i don't have a taste for those layouts. :p

I have no opinion.

no opinion from me either, its better cuz itloads faster, but its kinda blah...but good shot at it!

very plain