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www.cosmoeonelabs.cjb.net

one thing is for sure, definitely use a new font

I second that, I could barely read it at all. Nice graphics though.

Yeah, the font is definitely not happening. I would suggest ditching the background music too, or at least have an option to turn it off. And you have some kind of 'permission denied' javascript error. And it looks like the text at the top and bottom edges is getting cut off. Not sure if that's intentional or what.

there was font?
WHERE!~

The site looks good, good graphics, can hardly the read text! Other than that good job

I looked.

Let me tell you what I learned.

I learned to never click on another link you post ever again. Why? Cause I hate pop up windows with a passion. Get hosted on geocities or something for god's sake.

it is a geocities account. i got rid of all the pops up that they give you ... intsed of having to get on everytime you vist a page on my site all you get it 1 one time only when you reach the home page................

wow
theres like a billion of em :|

ok, questions/observations...

why does each page take so long to load? i feel like i'm waiting each time i click, then there's not a transition, just goes from a page to a blank white "loading" then a new page pops up. i expected it to be a flash site the way it was set up and loading, etc., then it wasn't. maybe it should be

the text needs a lot of work, both on the main weird blocky font used (its just not readable) and your body text. the arial you used in those images just doesn't look clean, and besides that why put text in an image when you can use html text and save on file size?

PLEASE give me an off button for the music, or just don't use it

why cut off the edges of your text on the bottom? its like it was designed to be in a pop-up window but then it just wasn't.

you do have some interesting imagery on here and its got some potential, it just has a long way to go IMO...

chris