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May 19th 2001#3818 Report
Member since: Apr 25th 2001
Posts: 33
Hello All,

Have a look and tell me whats the matter:::

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May 19th 2001#3820 Report
Member since: Mar 18th 2001
Posts: 6632
Too much red. Everything blurs in together.

The navigation doesn't stand out because it's red like everything else.

My eye wasn't drawn to anything when I opened the page. Usually your eye will jump to something of interest. An interesting shape, an interesting color or combination thereof, but when I loaded the page I just stared into the middle of my monitor.

Pick another color to use with the red, or seperate the nav more from the border or something.

Those polygonal shapes below the nav is what my eye was first drawn to, after I got over the staring problem. And they don't even do anything (at the moment anyway.). So make the viewer's eye go somewhere. Like I said before, color contrasts, shapes, and especially white space.

Anyway. I don't know if that helped at all, since I didn't say anything specific, but you get the idea.
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May 19th 2001#3831 Report
Member since: May 16th 2001
Posts: 82
*It needs much more contrast
   -You could make the face at the top another color such as 003399
   -Make the nav a different color, I think a white 50% gray with black text would look good.
*You could use mouseovers on the nav to make them go to a yellow
*Make the fractures better. They aren't very appealing. I'm not sure exactly what to tell you on that one.

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May 19th 2001#3871 Report
Member since: Apr 16th 2001
Posts: 759
i think it is mean with like a really dark blue backround and a light blue pic faded into that it woudl look cool as.
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