new site plz critique

click the plug first

try it twice its very big

www.members.tripod.com/killer4605/index.html


it should work now

Sorry, dead link.

OK, the link is alive now, but that is one heck of a download...and when I mouseover the links I get a javascript error.

you have done a really nice job on that thing but your code needs some major cleaning up.

Yes, it's a really cool idea how the plug goes in to light up the nav links, but it is also not apparent that you need to double click the plug. maybe have a little blurb telling the user what to do. and like Tornup said, the code is sloppy and doesn't work very well.

Also, it's not a good idea to use images for all of your bodytext, as it takes a lot longer to download, search engines can't find anything on your site because everything is an image, and the in-browser search function (ctrl +F) does not work.

But it's a really cool idea.

I like the site's layout, but it is a massive download. I would recomend that you have the sub pages as seperate pages not one. That should help download time. You could probaly just use regular text instead of pictures. I might brighten the BG up a little. Move the console up.

in your code, this is coded as followed:
[CODE]
EMBED NAME='CS990158782660' SRC='../../../Program%20Files/Macromedia/Dreamweaver%204/Lessons/Lesson%20Files/tap4.au' LOOP=false
AUTOSTART=false MASTERSOUND HIDDEN=true WIDTH=0 HEIGHT=0
[/CODE]

look at that source, ../../../Program%20Files/Macromedia/Dreamweaver%204/Lessons/Lesson%20Files/tap4.au that means, if i dont have dreamweaver in that file and i dont have that specific file in that specific drive, then ur page is gonna totally screw up, just so you know, u might wanna fix that

well this is a project for school and i really didnt know how to make it with text using dreamweaver.. i dont know how to put the text on the bottom square thing or any of that stuff.

how do i clean up the coding? i did all of it in imageready.

any help is appreciated, but reply quick because i have to present this on monday.

also the sound thing it was supposed to be a beep for when u mouseover the links.. i dont know why it routed it to the macromedia dir..

cmon guys reply i really need to fix this up but i dont know how its due on monday!!