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Apr 9th 2002#40885 Report
Member since: Apr 9th 2002
Posts: 3
Hi all,

I just completed my personal site and would like some feedback from the all of you. Be as brutally honest as you like as I'm looking for any kind of feedback, be it negative or positive. Let me know if you run across any usability problems with it. Thanks for any feedback!
The address is:

http://www.zipeye.com/timmy

Thanks much,
Tim
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Apr 9th 2002#40893 Report
Member since: Mar 24th 2002
Posts: 3114
Neat.

Critique as asked:

-I´m not sure I would go for the "from the edge" - positioning with the "Paper or plastic?" text....(from the edge of the headerPic)

-I would put the same title to content as the one in the link..IE, in "bio" , you´ve put "The vitals" as the title...Don´t know, maybe a slight bit confusing...?

- It could get pretty crowded, the space for contents isn´t too big?

-...that´s it..

Otherwise, love the ambience, the font, the colors, the style.

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Apr 9th 2002#40904 Report
Member since: Apr 9th 2002
Posts: 3
Thanks for the feedback Paavo!

You definately have an eye for the details. I never noticed I titled my bio page differently from the link title. I've moved the "paper or plastic" over the header graphic too. It flows with the page much better that way I feel.

Thanks for you help.

Tim
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Apr 9th 2002#40906 Report
Member since: Feb 14th 2002
Posts: 619
i like the idea of the site and all but i really hate sites that are toooooo empty. it makes me wanna go to sleep seriously.
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Apr 9th 2002#40932 Report
Member since: Jan 19th 2002
Posts: 800
ant, where the **** was your Pixel wars tournament entry?
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Apr 9th 2002#40952 Report
Member since: Apr 13th 2001
Posts: 956
Unless most of your visitors will be on 640x480 I suggest you make the top image and content 700px wide.
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