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Would like to have some coment on this one.
Its a design for flash but before i go so fare i would like some coment on what is good and what is bad

http://www.friserverplads.dk/michael24/testflash.gif

/Michael Knudsen

It wouldn't load...

ahhh okay try this one http://smukkeknudsen.subnet.dk/testflash.gif

still doesn't work, it says forbidden

Works for me....

hmm....



It should look fairly good, but somethings dragging it down...
It´s the colors, their too bright, the blue is too blue, u know?
..and the black lines are too simple..they fall out of place..
and where the hell would the content live? lol

"3D","2D","Web" and "More" - blocks should, in my opinion, be either outlined all the way, or not at all....


Anyway, work on it, and it should become good. :D

(don´t let an asshole like me put you down..i´m no pro!! lol )

now its working ^_-

i don't like it at all..way too blue 1st of all...

thanks guys have made a new background http://www.friserverplads.dk/michael24/testflash1.gif
Better or just far out ?

hmm im sorry but i have to do this ;)

1. bad color scheme.
2. tries to look technical but comes off as kind of cartoony.
3. too many random black lines (bottom and top right)
4. wayyy too small. you should at least make your sites fit on the screen for 640x480, theres no reason to make them smaller than that(hm i just realized you might be on 640x480 and dont realize that it is dwarfingly small on higher resolutions like 1280x1024)

maybe u right i will look at it and come back, with a more technical look.
Im using 1280x1024 and i dont have any problem to see it but maybe i should make it for 640x480 :-)