Critique A New Design

http://personal.bellsouth.net/~tsg1985/ccs/images/demo.gif
http://personal.bellsouth.net/~tsg1985/ccs/index.html

The top will be the sub pages. It will have a fold out menu as many of you have seen, and it may incorperate flash to do the changes.

The bottom is just a splash. It may be temporary until we have real content to put on the site.

Tell me any ideas about it. If you hate something, say it. If you hate it all, say it. If you think something could be done better, say it....

1) Fix The typo in the motto.

2) For your sub page thingie I would have some different buildings for different pages.

3) Have the mascot and principal and staff info link to pages relating to those topics.

4) On the splash page I would put pictures of campus buildings and students in the background.

Other than that, it is great.

I checked the spelling on the motto, and it appears to me to be correct.

As far as linking and changing the content, that's the plan. I've just been drawing out my idea on it before I start coding it.

I think that putting those pictures on the page would clutter it. I like how it looks very clear.

You have:

Lerning Today, Leading Tommorw.

It should be:

Learning Today, Leading Tomorrow.

Thanks for that correction. I'm still working on the text for that.

I'm sure that people can do far more comments than that. You know you want to critique.

Text is too small. Especiallly to be anti-aliased. Either make it bigger in the header area, or make it aliased.

Yeah, the motto has a typo, and the text r tiny.....but it's ok for a simple design