site check

Could you guys check over my site for broken links and grammar errors? Link is www.finalphase.org

man that is one clean lookin site. you did a really great job with that color scheme too. very nice ;)

Thank you, how about the grammar and broken links? I would also like feed back on any ways I might improve the site.

heh sorry im tired haha

i didnt notice any broken links, and there was no horrible grammar.

but that could be the need for sleep talking. i think it looks awesome tho

Great looking site, I like it.

Couldn't see any grammar errors straight away. Just one mathematical err.... ;)

> ...offering a 20% discount on Infused News. Normal price $200
> and is now slashed down to an amazing price of $180...

That's only a 10% discount, not quite so amazing.
However I'm sure ppl will still be happy to save something.


:rolleyes:

Cheers,
PNut.

It looks great, except the text on the left (the images) should have more than about 20% difference in brightness... Make the text a bit darker, perhaps?

> ...offering a 20% discount on Infused News. Normal price $200
> and is now slashed down to an amazing price of $180...

Peanut you're the only one of about 60 people that noticed that mistake. Mad props to you man. :-)

It looks great, except the text on the left (the images) should have more than about 20% difference in brightness... Make the text a bit darker, perhaps?

Now that I've the basically every thing done I can go a head and play around with the colors. Thanks vortex