Early Concept

Hello, I am new; I have yet to even do a signature but all in due time. Anyhow I made this .. it isn't exactly top quality but I would like to build on it.. It is very simple and easy to make, although I just wonder what you guys think of it.

http://www.dotyours.com/dakin/bubbles.gif

*just curls up into a little ball and weeps silently in the corner, rocking back and forth every now and than*

geeee that makes me feel nice :( .

What can i say, i know how to woo my men. ;) ;)

I just thought it would convey what i was feeling much stronger than any babbling post would. We all have our bad moments. Ihave more horrible flunks than i care to say.

Your first mistake was using that shade of blue. ITs a bad shade of blue. Never use blue thats closer to the 'pure blue' color. It comes off too blinding and bright and just not a pleasing shade IMHO

Your second mistake was using that texture. ITs a 'newbie alert' Its like using the twirl filter. Yah, its neat, but Its not very orignal either.

If you had used any other texture you might have heard me sob inthe corner a mite less.

I dunno. It just doesn't sit well with me.

I never said it was my most original work , I frankly didn't like it that much either...

But here, just take the concept over the actuall image..

I want a abstract on the left, view on the right and towards the bottom the title... I like blues... ^.^, further on I will produce some better things.. (I am not a newbie, that was thrown together in minutes just cuz I am tired and bored!)

It will come.

Just hang around, and let DPQ beat you up a time or 2.... it will come

Originally posted by Dakin
I never said it was my most original work , I frankly didn't like it that much either...

Bah than why did you get that hurt look on your face when i burst into tears? Don't deny it?

Thats just how i am. Exploding eyes and fits of hyteric sobing. Its just so much more fun to critque people that way.

Anyways i suggest using a less saterated color at the very least. Try keeping your abstract parts seperate from the navigation and context area as well.

Will do; I will try to pump out something tonight for ya thats not o... newbie looking.

and not.. so bright on your poor eyes :D

Those bubbles are just built-in patterns that come with Photoshop....at least they look exactly like them, or they are......

that was already pointed out , I was too lazy to make my own.. but I have a new website under construction -- and it doesn't use those patterns ^.^ ; the only useful pattern really I see, is the rusty one... it can be manipulated nicely.. but I havent really looked much at those patterns.