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Dec 11th 2001#23002 Report
Member since: Dec 10th 2001
Posts: 18
Let me preface this by saying I'm not the most talented individual when it comes to artistry. I have a couple web clients that I have picked up over the years on the side, and I don't do it full time. So with that in mind I'd like some critique on my site.

I needed something I could slap on a business card and be at least somewhat proud of ;o) Its kind of bland and redundant in my opinion at the moment, but I'm stuck in a rut. Feel free to tear it apart, I'm not sensitive. The links don't work as it is just a concept. And the text is just babble filler ;o)

(I ramble too much)

http://www.multimediamedics.com
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Dec 11th 2001#23010 Report
Member since: Nov 24th 2001
Posts: 66
Looks pretty good to me.
One thing that looks out of place is that inverted pic of the hands.
(at least to me)

And another thing you might want to do is darken the menu text a little.
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Dec 17th 2001#23702 Report
Member since: May 23rd 2001
Posts: 624
1.Right away i have been beef about the TOPnavigation. Try using one size smaller BUT MAKE IT BOLD, or at the very least use a LIGHTEN THE COLOR. Maybe make it bold its current size as well. Navigation is the ONE thing you want people to see clearly above all things, expect maybe content.

2.Blah, take away that inverted image. While it might be a neat effect inverted images look nothing if not tacty in their unedited forum.

3.Line up "home" with the start of your text. Meaning if the text is seperated 10 pixels from the edge, make HOME start 10 pixels from the edge. nice and lined up

4.Ep Navigation on the right needs to be darker just as the navigation on top needs to be lighter. you need lots more contrast.
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Dec 18th 2001#23811 Report
Member since: Aug 28th 2001
Posts: 970
I don't really care for the orange color for your rollovers. Maybe add a little texture in the home border, and the grey copyright border at the bottom. What I mean is sort of have what you have in your logo where you have a pattern but it fades out. That's just what I think. I like the site though. Good Job
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