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Nov 7th 2001#19979 Report
Member since: Mar 28th 2001
Posts: 37
someone, critique please, im trying to get people to come to my site again and again.
im working on making it a resource site for people wanting to get started. please visit and take a look
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Nov 7th 2001#19980 Report
Member since: Mar 18th 2001
Posts: 6632
Why do you want people to come again and again if you don't even have it done yet? No one is going to come back at all if there is no information there.

The navigation is confusing and not very apparent. I skipped right over the site of the week and tutorials and forum links because it looked like a banner ad. Might want to figure out another way to do that.

In fact, everything below the header looks like banner ads or get rich quick schemes. Which I automatically don't look at. So basically your entire page below the header is invisible.
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Nov 7th 2001#19993 Report
Member since: Mar 28th 2001
Posts: 1109
wow. brutal honesty!

anyhow, i think you have too much going on here. we've got a flag, a wall of colored bricks, the orange-ish SOTW/tutorial/forum/store buttons, the twisted wires, the ring around the 't' in the logo, the long dark gray buttons plus much more. too much.

it is tempting to want to do everything but it is important to focus.
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Nov 8th 2001#20024 Report
Member since: Apr 25th 2001
Posts: 33
I pretty much agree dude. You have a action flick going on. When I look at the site the first thing that busts me in the face is you trying to sell stuff. Is it a resource or a gas station. You have some cool inspirational links. Try to study the architecture. Enjoy.
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