vamp (not for instruments)

i just finished this layout...tell me wut u guyz think
of it.

the links on the page don't work, so i guess no need to waste time clicking

www.vampireguild.cjb.net

well, click that link, but i meant the links on that page.

well i'm sure u know wut i meant.

k thanx

I think it looks like you followed the tutorials you found at striding studio, and not much else. The navigation links don't fit with the grungy style at all. The bottom left corner has sharp lines, which just looks like you forgot to grungefy it. You need to put padding around that middle content thing, because the text runs all the way to the edge and makes it really hard to read. White space is your friend.

I am guessing you really dont care for netscape users either. Nor do you care for folks who don't use Internet Explorer 5.x

Those buttons you are using for navigation dont work in Netscape. The <.button> tag is proprietary to IE 5 and higher.

One other thing.

STOP putting your CSS in 3 seperate <.style> tags. It servers no purpose. They can all go in the same one. Plus, why are you putting your style tags in the body of the document?

yea that is pretty much all i used...
wave and the tut's at striding and
ready made grungish text.

and yea i've had feedback about that padding thing
in the content, and i still don't know why i never
remember to do it heh.
and why does it matter if i break up the style tags?

heh yea i know there is a lot of white space ... but doesn't really matter cause no one is going to see the site anyways
been cancled

it says due to a couple of idiots this site is something something. O_O its marquee text

cuz the guys that told me to make it
told me today "nevah mind"
wouldn't you say that they're idiots?

they said they already had someone making the page and they
didn't know that I was actually going to do it.

plz put the site online again so I can see the layout anyway

ok i think i changed it to vamp.html
http://www.eccentrix.com/gaming/amenranozira/vamp.html

I like it

check my site and give your opinion http://www.bogguard.be

hmmm not bad bog but i dont think you should use times new roman as your fonts heh.