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Jun 7th 2004#152626 Report
Member since: Nov 10th 2003
Posts: 129
Here we go, the usual please, crit away.

Soaring Designs

This is a company I am opening with a guy I know, hopefully all goes well, I feel that the site is.
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Jun 7th 2004#152643 Report
Member since: Apr 25th 2003
Posts: 1977
Well the first thing that comes to mind is the empty header. You need more to create interest....otherwise its just wasted space. Do you even need a header?? You could scrap it and create interest elsewhere. Dont be afraid to break a rule or 2.

About the header.......why is it outlined in black? It should be outlined in blue like everything else.

Your section headers "tell a friend" and "projects" are blurry. Try to fix sure your text is set to crisp or similar.

Id also reccomend a soft BG pattern. I hate them......but i think due to the light color scheme it'll help your layout pop. Otherwise...its a good start.
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Jun 7th 2004#152646 Report
Member since: Mar 29th 2003
Posts: 1326
I agree with Rodder, and I'd also like to add that the place for body text is really wide - its not easy to read text with that many words per line, and it looks bad. You could have three good paragraphs there and it would look like you didn't type anything. So I'd suggest breaking it down so that there are less words per line (less wide) and also using a bigger font (Arial at like 78% seems to work for me).
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Jun 10th 2004#153017 Report
Member since: Nov 10th 2003
Posts: 129
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Jun 10th 2004#153021 Report
Member since: Oct 16th 2003
Posts: 717
why release the site if all of the portfolio is offline? it's really the most important part of the site.
and and "web design company offers superior service in the Web Site Design and Web Development" somehow i have a difficult time beleiving that when the comcast page comes up on a page not found. ;)
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Jun 15th 2004#153381 Report
Member since: May 22nd 2004
Posts: 21
i dont like the background..looks to "clip art" `ish
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Jun 15th 2004#153432 Report
Member since: Nov 10th 2003
Posts: 129
This site looks terrible at anything above 1024x768. My boss at a store I work at had a mac (one of those huge screens with massive resolution), and I was nervous to show her, and I did, and the site looked terrble. What do I do?
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Jun 15th 2004#153440 Report
Member since: Jun 20th 2003
Posts: 1203
I don't like the colors.
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Jun 16th 2004#153503 Report
Member since: Jun 5th 2001
Posts: 150
Colors - Too cold. Add in an orange or something to warm it up a bit.
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Jun 16th 2004#153519 Report
Member since: May 1st 2002
Posts: 3034
its not bad, add a splash of color as mentioned, change the background.. and get rid of that world map, its been done too many times.
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