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Jun 2nd 2004#152227 Report
Member since: Sep 29th 2003
Posts: 1496
Sekzy, I will tell you this. Yes, being a religous man, I don't like #1 at all. But I find the next 2 to be hilarious, you definatly need more stuff like that.
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Jun 3rd 2004#152364 Report
Member since: Jul 27th 2003
Posts: 27
I'm as much of an atheist as one can be, but I didn't find #1 funny. The next two were much better, the first two panels of #2 are meh as far as jokes go (though true), but it was ended well, and #3 was just funny.

As for your site design, which is what we're here for, I very much like it. I've never quite managed the grundgy look, so I appriciate what you've done there.
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Jun 3rd 2004#152385 Report
Member since: Aug 28th 2001
Posts: 970
How’s he supposed to improve his work from subjective reasoning? I can't speak for him but I personally wouldn't give a crap if any of you laugh or not at a comic I made. It's all about personal taste. I bet there are some people that'll find it funny.

Whether his website (which he wants us to critique) actually fits his comic is what we should look at. GEEZE! Personally I think it fits his dark sense of humor...

I think I agree with mihai on changing the type though. With a comic you should be able to read the dialog and narrations fairly quickly because people need to get the joke or whatever you're trying to say with so little amount of words. Gothic type looks nice but it’s hard to read and isn’t practical.
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Jun 3rd 2004#152393 Report
Member since: Aug 25th 2001
Posts: 1619
I still liked all those gamer comics you showed me back in the day. But the thrid one is the best.
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Jun 3rd 2004#152400 Report
Member since: May 27th 2002
Posts: 627
didnt read the whole debate preceding my post because i'm just lazy.

my opinion however, is um, dunno, the god one is pretty funny, but it needs timing, it reads like a stand-up sketch kind of thing, first time i read it i wasnt too impressed, then i read it over and paused a bit for the punchline, sounds weird but thats how my head worked it, and i had a little laugh.
secondly (was there a firstly?) they're too short. yeah the gags are designed to be that way, but comics generally arent.

nice sketches though.
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Jun 5th 2004#152523 Report
Member since: Jun 3rd 2003
Posts: 1867
ooh. havent been here a while. my bad.

anyway, yeah. though i agree with flackbait about doing it for yourself, maybe i will change it. i just needed some sort of a roundabout way to start off.

and emptyspace - glad you liked it but I don't think it's a good comic if you have to go through all that work to enjoy it.

though I don't intend to make the comics longer, really...

i'll see if i can't come up with another comic to replace as the first. if I do, i'll repost it here.

thanks for the crits guys :D (anyone else?)
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