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Mar 23rd 2004#146150 Report
Member since: Mar 8th 2004
Posts: 20
So I'm working on a presentation about my hometown as project from my class. The layout is pretty much worked out I think, just looking for the usual feedback from people who are a bit more experienced.

The text is in swedish so just focus on the looks ok


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Mar 24th 2004#146175 Report
Member since: May 22nd 2003
Posts: 315
The lines on the site are pretty jaggy, but its still nice...

I think it needs a little more, and the logo should stand out a little more..
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Mar 30th 2004#146747 Report
Member since: Sep 6th 2001
Posts: 3893
I think it looks alright, but I do have a few suggestions.

The entire layout -
The entire thing seems a little small, if thats an actual size screenshot. I would maybe expand everything a little more and make things easier to read.

Colors -
The colors kindof clash with one another, maybe pick something that flows a little more.

That line -
That one line is horribile. its really jagged and could probably be redone pretty simply and would look MUCH better.

Other than that I think it looks alright.
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Mar 30th 2004#146760 Report
Member since: Mar 8th 2004
Posts: 20
You mean the line between the textarea and the menu or the rounded edge between blue/lightblue?

I'll have to check if that one is anti-aliased...

About the size: it will not be a website, more like a cd-rom production type of thing.. that's why I tried out a smaller version, atm it's 640x480. But I was thinking about a background with a simple texture to size it up with.
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Mar 30th 2004#146762 Report
Member since: Aug 12th 2002
Posts: 1693
Yay @ Vasa, *does the Pampas dance*
I think the whole layout is a bit small too...
... hihi 4 minutes idea,
Just tried to give it a bit more life.
but blah lol.
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