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Dec 5th 2003#131929 Report
Member since: Sep 29th 2003
Posts: 1496
Well, yeah, just a business template I put together. What should I change on it? C&C greatly appreciated.
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Dec 5th 2003#131932 Report
Member since: Sep 7th 2002
Posts: 928
I'm not sure I could trust a business with a little character like that in the corner, unless it was a southpark business.
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Dec 5th 2003#131934 Report
Member since: Oct 16th 2003
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i hope u never show somehting like this to a client that says "yeah, i know u're not stupid, you could obvously see the building." it's usually best to grab more proff looking text.
the main font at the top to me looks more fun than business like. i have to agree with michaelp about the cartoon guy. i think i've talked to you about doing stuff like that to your work.
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Dec 5th 2003#131942 Report
Member since: Aug 12th 2002
Posts: 1693
My 2 dollars:
I love business sites.
Here are some ideas how to get a even more business style for it.
Under your business name the blue stripes should be thinner...
The blue round thingy on the right...uhm I would take that away.
It's a bit too plain to be eyecandy and if it's not eyecandy there isn't a point for it to be there.
...The font well uhm...yes...Can't say anything about that because you would probably use the the font that the company uses with a logo on the right or left...right?
The font text could be a bit smaller.
I do like verdana but not at that size.
Looks too "amaturistic".
And yup the guy is a bye bye guy.
Still like the basics of it all :D
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Dec 5th 2003#131956 Report
Member since: Apr 5th 2001
Posts: 2544
hmm, I don't like it... it looks too boring to me. Not fresh and attractive, that keyboard at the top is such a cliche. Using one bright color in there would make the layout a lot better!
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Dec 5th 2003#131965 Report
Member since: Sep 29th 2003
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Aight, thanks for the input. I was just being stupid yesterday, I have no idea why I stuck the cartoon there. It WILL be gone, and I am gonna change the text. I was a friggin moron yesterday... wtf was I thinking?
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Dec 5th 2003#131966 Report
Member since: Mar 25th 2002
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As has been mentioned lose the cliched pictures of keyboards and high rise blocks. It all smacks of "boy in bedroom" designing to me.
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Dec 5th 2003#131967 Report
Member since: May 22nd 2003
Posts: 315
Hmmm... I really don't like this for a business site... business sites HAVE to be catchy, and VERY clean... but the keyboard doesn't work, it has nothing special about it, on top of that, all the white space!
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Dec 5th 2003#131969 Report
Member since: Sep 29th 2003
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Thx for the comments, I will fix that up when I get home from school and then let you rip it up again. :p That's why I love this place, if people don't like it, they tell you they dont like it. Most people are usually, "It's okay, you could improve."
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Dec 6th 2003#132016 Report
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