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Nov 13th 2003#128754 Report
Member since: Jul 2nd 2003
Posts: 27
Re doing my 2 sites, bit by bit ;) and I would like some feedback on what i have so far.

Firstly : the061
www.the061.co.uk

It will be a flash site currently just a visual. More urban style. Content along the lines of recent freelance work, a little about me and links to t-shirts etc

secondly : angrynorth
www.angrynorth.com

More restrained version similar content.

any feedback welcomed.

Cheers ppl
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Nov 13th 2003#128761 Report
Member since: Aug 12th 2002
Posts: 1693
I like the first one!
I would put the text at least one pixel to the right.
It should have some room on the left and under and over text.
Then I would take away the pink at the top under the manc design people and put that text 1-2 pixels to the right too...
So that it ain't going on the The061 background.
Otherwise very nice.

This one I don't like that much...it's too simple and amature looking in someway...okey this is just imo...though...
First off the name and the site don't really fit.
then I don't like 1px black outer strokes...makes it look to "inboxed".
Not sure why but I think if you do that it makes the site to 2 different things...the site and the background and imo these 2 should be the same...they should work with eachother...
Then the gray texture with the 70 degrees lines on...naah...
If you have 800*600 you won't the see the navigation at all...
And the navigation could be a bit smaller too..
Then the "main text" / Angrynorth.com...why is it there...it's not in the middle and ain't aligned with anything...

Okey I hope you don't take this the wrong way...
It's better than many sites out there but in imo it's not perfect...
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Nov 13th 2003#128768 Report
Member since: Jul 19th 2003
Posts: 810
i really really dislike the first one...... its too dark for my liking

i realy do love the seocnd one though mate

Its looking spantifacally great
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Nov 13th 2003#128775 Report
Member since: Jul 2nd 2003
Posts: 27
Thanks both for the comments. I guess I couldn't have got 2 more contrasting opinions

Thanks for the positive comments on the 2nd design (angrynorth) lazyroll although, I think I am more with Censured on this one as its not really "me" if you know what I mean. But then again, I've also had some good comments about it too. :confused:

Oh well, I leave it in the capable hands of the rest of the forum. Please make your opinions known so I can unmash my head :D

Ta muchly
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Nov 13th 2003#128777 Report
Member since: Nov 12th 2003
Posts: 70
I like the second one better. The logo on top looks really good and the layout is more aesthetically pleasing to me.
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Nov 14th 2003#128887 Report
Member since: Jun 20th 2003
Posts: 1203
I like the old Angry North layout.
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Nov 14th 2003#128896 Report
Member since: Jul 2nd 2003
Posts: 27
:D Telemakhos
I loved that one too, but it was difficult to navigate through, I couldn't really show the other stuff I do with that site :(
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Nov 14th 2003#128902 Report
Member since: Jun 20th 2003
Posts: 1203
Is it still up? It was awesome.
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Nov 14th 2003#128940 Report
Member since: Jul 2nd 2003
Posts: 27
afraid not, although you are kind of making me think maybe it should be ;)
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