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Nov 13th 2003 | #128754 Report |
Member since: Jul 2nd 2003 Posts: 27 |
Re doing my 2 sites, bit by bit ;) and I would like some feedback on what i have so far. Firstly : the061 www.the061.co.uk It will be a flash site currently just a visual. More urban style. Content along the lines of recent freelance work, a little about me and links to t-shirts etc secondly : angrynorth www.angrynorth.com More restrained version similar content. any feedback welcomed. Cheers ppl |
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Nov 13th 2003 | #128761 Report |
Member since: Aug 12th 2002 Posts: 1693 |
I like the first one! I would put the text at least one pixel to the right. It should have some room on the left and under and over text. Then I would take away the pink at the top under the manc design people and put that text 1-2 pixels to the right too... So that it ain't going on the The061 background. Otherwise very nice. This one I don't like that much...it's too simple and amature looking in someway...okey this is just imo...though... First off the name and the site don't really fit. then I don't like 1px black outer strokes...makes it look to "inboxed". Not sure why but I think if you do that it makes the site to 2 different things...the site and the background and imo these 2 should be the same...they should work with eachother... Then the gray texture with the 70 degrees lines on...naah... If you have 800*600 you won't the see the navigation at all... And the navigation could be a bit smaller too.. Then the "main text" / Angrynorth.com...why is it there...it's not in the middle and ain't aligned with anything... Okey I hope you don't take this the wrong way... It's better than many sites out there but in imo it's not perfect... |
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Nov 13th 2003 | #128768 Report |
Member since: Jul 19th 2003 Posts: 810 |
i really really dislike the first one...... its too dark for my liking i realy do love the seocnd one though mate Its looking spantifacally great |
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Nov 13th 2003 | #128775 Report |
Member since: Jul 2nd 2003 Posts: 27 |
Thanks both for the comments. I guess I couldn't have got 2 more contrasting opinions Thanks for the positive comments on the 2nd design (angrynorth) lazyroll although, I think I am more with Censured on this one as its not really "me" if you know what I mean. But then again, I've also had some good comments about it too. :confused: Oh well, I leave it in the capable hands of the rest of the forum. Please make your opinions known so I can unmash my head :D Ta muchly |
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Nov 13th 2003 | #128777 Report |
Member since: Nov 12th 2003 Posts: 70 |
I like the second one better. The logo on top looks really good and the layout is more aesthetically pleasing to me.
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Nov 14th 2003 | #128887 Report |
Member since: Jun 20th 2003 Posts: 1203 |
I like the old Angry North layout.
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Nov 14th 2003 | #128896 Report |
Member since: Jul 2nd 2003 Posts: 27 |
:D Telemakhos I loved that one too, but it was difficult to navigate through, I couldn't really show the other stuff I do with that site :( |
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Nov 14th 2003 | #128902 Report |
Member since: Jun 20th 2003 Posts: 1203 |
Is it still up? It was awesome.
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Nov 14th 2003 | #128940 Report |
Member since: Jul 2nd 2003 Posts: 27 |
afraid not, although you are kind of making me think maybe it should be ;)
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