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Sep 25th 2003#122256 Report
Member since: Mar 29th 2003
Posts: 1326
Got a new host so direct image linking for mr. trhaynes now. :D

Be supercritical - I need it.

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Sep 25th 2003#122257 Report
Member since: Jan 14th 2003
Posts: 942
Looks a bit 1990'ish. The bevel looks strange, and the font looks a bit "Rough."

Cool concept though (BTW your sig rocks).

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Sep 25th 2003#122260 Report
Member since: Jul 25th 2003
Posts: 489
I don't know if it's just me or the pill style thing seemed too tutorially, should add more elements to it (soft metal, etc.) another suggestion is if 3D design doesnt work out 2D design is a lot easier to make.

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Sep 25th 2003#122265 Report
Member since: Dec 13th 2002
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Work on it some more. A lot more. It's really simple. All you did was make a shape, add a bevel and maybe something else, then put words on it. You should spend more time giving it the feeling that YOU created it ... not a tutorial.

There's no theme. It's just a box. Theres nothing there that would catch my attention to make me want to come back for more. It's really simple and boring.

Keep workin on it. :D I'm sure you'll come up with something.
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Sep 25th 2003#122307 Report
Member since: Mar 29th 2003
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It's plastic, not bevel, but you're right - I didn't really make it - just made the shape and followed a tutorial.

So basically thats what someone else told me and I just needed to know if anyone else agreed. Which case - well actually I've already started on another one. :D I'll upload that pretty soon for C&C. Thanks guys for your help.

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