final-dreams

Hey, I've just uploaded my website and I was wondering what you guys think of it! Thanks for your time, please be honest and give all the critics you can make up... so I can improve

http://www.final-dreams.com/

Yorick

Looks alright, Kindof hard to read everything, but I think that is just the 'grunge' style. I think it looks pretty good though.

Nice work and welcome to the boards :D

thanks yeah, I emailed the staff cause I got tired of waiting after a year still not having my activation email
And if you can't read it... oh well try the low bandwith version:

http://www.final-dreams.com/tiny

soon I will make a splash page where you can choose.

(normal = 490kb min.
tiny = 92kb min.)

Use verdana as a font. Dont have all the text as images. Every time you update you have to upload a new .jpg. But thats just my opinion. The affiliates look a little out of place. I like the grunge work though.

tom

the idea was that the site just has a special font, but since I update that part not so many times it doesn't matter. For people who have problems with reading it there is the low bandwith version... The affilates went wrong or something :S it is supposed to show 2 extra buttons

um well its a lovely layout i admit that brilliant job on that,
but it is quiet hard to read,

all in all i say excellent, althou maybe change the font colour possibly to white might help a bit

sorry its so hard to read i lost interest , try to get the tesxt to catch the readers eyes i think its to dark right now.

like the latin! but readability is an issue.

whoa never expected it so hard to read :| maybe I can do the same as what I did with the other version is place normal text, though I think it will lose a lot of feel to the piece, thanks for the comments

For the readability issues, and just pretty much for easiness to navigate and shizzle, I would say that the compact version is better than the full one.