need some feedback

rough sorta design for my portfolio site:

http://www33.brinkster.com/finkproduxions/middle/finkyo.htm

anything need changing?
anything need adding?

cheerz

everything looks great except I don't really get the toilet paper part you know what I mean? I personally don't wanna see a toilet paper, I hope I'm not insulting you on any artistic levels.

It's nice. I'm fine with whole toilet paper thing, since any paper is essentially toilet paper as soon as your wipe your arse with it. :D

Other than that, I have nothing to add. Nice site. Soothing colors.

Dont really like to toilet paper. Anything that reminds me of ass does not please me, especially ass with sh*t in it. ewww.

but overall its pretty good.

cheerz for the feedback:

gunna look into replacing the bog roll, i sorta like it tho keeps things original.....in my own little world anyway

thx again

I likes it, very nice and clean. Its cool. I'm not sure if i really like the toilet paper either but oh well :p

i like the color choices. is it just me or does the big white space above the toilet paper seem a bit empty? :-D

I think it looks pretty good, cant wait to see it up and running with some real content on there ;)

Nice work man :D

Kewl beans! haha I really like it. The toilet paper is awesome. It's a statement of defiance and crazyness.

Or maybe just a statement of clean asses. I dunno.

Originally posted by Malevolent_Jester
It's nice. I'm fine with whole toilet paper thing, since any paper is essentially toilet paper as soon as your wipe your arse with it. :D

..nearly fell off the chair laughing there.. o_O :D

The design is well done in regards to color and layout. The toilet paper is original but wrong IMO & hinders the cosmetic appeal.

The graphic is extremely flat looking and angled. I would cut the toilet paper out or illustrate my own to add some dimension to the page with lots of shadows and lighting.

Regards
Fess