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Jun 20th 2003#109416 Report
Member since: Aug 22nd 2001
Posts: 12
Please give the web site I'm designing for a client a review.
The links are not working except the map. This is the initial layout with the homepage only. Any advice on this page and ideas for the others would be appreciated. The link is http://www.lrmassage.com
You may have to refresh the page a few times to get the page.
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Jun 20th 2003#109429 Report
Member since: Jun 2nd 2003
Posts: 233
WOW THATS BRIGHT! lol, not bad looking though. theres some things i would change though...

1. the relaxing the body & mind text should be whiter. it looks too much watermarky.

2. i dont like the fact that there isnt an intoduction or welcome to... on the homepage. it almost looks like a big splash. you can either add text to the lower green part below the images or somehow cut the left (flower) or right (logo) into pieces and allow a section for a welcome to...

3. get rid of the 1 pixel blue border around the flower.
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Jun 20th 2003#109474 Report
Member since: Aug 22nd 2001
Posts: 12
Thanks, it's still in the early stages and you're right, it needs the colors desaturated a bit. I like your idea about the flower. I will tighten it up.
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Jun 22nd 2003#109576 Report
Member since: Jun 3rd 2003
Posts: 1867
yes i agree, the colors are too fruity and bright to be for a relaxing site.

I dont know, just seems kind of, uh, boring.

I also don't like the text that reads "Relaxing the body and mind"
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