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Jul 16th 2001#8658 Report
Member since: Jun 24th 2001
Posts: 6
Hi folks. since the weather is really bad here at the moment, I spent the last evening making a little splash page. Comments and critique would be appreciated very much...

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Jul 16th 2001#8659 Report
Member since: Jan 1st 1970
Nice work Giz! I really like it. I like the way you 'seamed' the letters and added fasteners...

Construct Critz: There seems to be a dark 'smudge' in the middle of your 'C'. I tried to clean my monitor screen for 5 mins before I realized it was in your splash. Also, the bevel on your wire 'bevels' at each break where is passes behind the letters. Maybe some creative masking and make it a solid 1 piece wire...
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Jul 16th 2001#8681 Report
Member since: Jun 28th 2001
Posts: 15
I like the splash, kinda of remids me of the carbon fiber inside my friends honda. Besides that mark on the "c" the design bangz!!! oh yea like the screws also.
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Jul 16th 2001#8683 Report
Member since: Apr 5th 2001
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i like it. That would work good as a splashpage.
The lightning is good, like the texture on the letters.
Colors are nice also.
Maybe add in another wire and let it wrap around the other wire.

The only criticism i can think of is that those pipes seem a bit out of place, maybe make them a bit darker (shadow).
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Jul 16th 2001#8700 Report
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