my latest work..

well.. here is my latest project.. just messing around mainly..

http://sleepydude.homestead.com/files/sampler.jpg


its around 25k or so...


Its a little empty right now.. and the font and text doesn't really seem to work to well.. imo.. but..


any comments (please!)

Thanks in advance..

Snore

I like it Snore, the verticle text does look funky to me though. (I suppose that is what you were saying) I also thing it might be a little better looking if that background "gray" was a little lighter shade of gray. (opinion)
oh yeah....
Is that gonna be flash? ............it looks flashy

thanks torn.. I will try some different shades of grey...

as for it being flashed.. cool idea.. but for now its just gonna be an as-is image.. ..besides my flash skills suck.. :(

any other opinions?

Snore

Looks good, I see what you mean with the font. I like it, but the vertical text jumbles a bit. Maybe you could place each character individually for better spacing.
Later,
Justin

well here is a slightly revised version.. adding a little more detail.. and some color changes comments?


http://sleepydude.homestead.com/files/sampler2.jpg (45k)



Snore

I'm not a huge fan of that khaki colour, but otha than that the layout's good and the font's funky. but hey, what would i know?
'co
::afterthought:: maybe you should swap the red circle n tha coloured thingy circle to make the lines straigter/more 'clean looking'. i ended up going round in circles to see where they led!! check wot ne one else says - as i sed i really wouldn't know.

the picture is nice, would work great as a portfolio.
I think i wouldn't let the lines cross eachother, use tia's tip maybe.

If you make it in flash i would let the pictures scroll from the top to the bottom, just like this: silvernet

I would probably change the backgroundcolor to yellow or even orange. But nice work, Snore.

YAAAAY! this is my 100th posting here, i still like it.
Begin to like it even more every day...

Very cool, I like it alot. Definetely would look cool in flash as a portfolio!

thanks for the comments all


the bg color.. I dunno.. I like it.. I do like greens.. (I guess thats really all that matters but.. )

hmm.. I am looking into flashing it.. but its such a pain in the @ss!

Thanks again.


Snore <-- Flash Hater! :p