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Mar 28th 2001#729 Report
Member since: Mar 28th 2001
Posts: 1
This is something I made one night and I was wondering if anybody would just tell me what they think and maybe what to do to make it better...
I'm thinking of adding some chaings to the rusted part, or maybe making it a little more metal looking. I am going to make the text smaller though...

Worlds Apart
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Mar 29th 2001#733 Report
Member since: Mar 18th 2001
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well, the one thing that stands out to me is the typography...maybe some script type font...mix it up a bit. Also, play with the colors on the left to kindof lighten up between the black nuetral (negative, not neutral) spaces.

overall, its nice.
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Mar 30th 2001#788 Report
Member since: Mar 18th 2001
Posts: 23
looks sharp. in my opinion i'd take the text on the left and overlay it in the color like you did on the right side. and i agree with Ob on the colors on the left.

like i said tho lookin sharp ( i like the poem too)
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