New image! look here! Comments please!

http://consol3clash.homestead.com/files/intertwined.jpg

Very busy. Hard to look at for more than a few seconds.

Nice though....very blue, could use some orange.

Thanks!@

Yeah, pretty busy. I think it would look better if only part of the image was like that, and then the rest just big open white space for some contrast. It's a little overwhelming to fill the entire image like that. Also I think the kerning is a little tight on the blue words. It looks ok for the bold black letters, but the skinny blue ones may benefit from a bit more space.

Solid advice deker!....
(Who's been reading the typography stuff this month?)


The image is indeed overwhelming...to me it is just WAY to bright

Matt's idea about bringing in a contrasting color might be helpfull too.

Actually I learned typography in college. That one semester I went to it anyway... That was my favorite class. But yeah, a contrasting color would be good. Some kind of contrast. Either with color or with whitespace. (is that considered a color? I know it's considered a design element, I've seen whole books on the use of whitespace.... Anyway) But you have a good start on making interesting shapes and designs, and now just fine tune them a bit.

A bit busy, but I like the way you placed the text in the lighter spot. Also like the fonts and kerning...

I like it but the hard edged corners would look better if maybe faded out into white....

So it blends better with a white background but I'm not sure what you are using it for.

just another peice for my portfolio.

Very nice indeed.

Do you think you could give me a quick tutorial on that? Or if it's too much trouble, just tell me what filters you used for it.

But overall, I like you image. Just abit bright :D