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New image! look here! Comments please!

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Jul 12th 2001#8312 Report
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Jul 12th 2001#8316 Report
Member since: Mar 24th 2001
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Very busy. Hard to look at for more than a few seconds.

Nice though....very blue, could use some orange.
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Jul 12th 2001#8320 Report
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Thanks!@
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Jul 12th 2001#8329 Report
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Yeah, pretty busy. I think it would look better if only part of the image was like that, and then the rest just big open white space for some contrast. It's a little overwhelming to fill the entire image like that. Also I think the kerning is a little tight on the blue words. It looks ok for the bold black letters, but the skinny blue ones may benefit from a bit more space.
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Jul 13th 2001#8364 Report
Member since: Mar 27th 2001
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Solid advice deker!....
(Who's been reading the typography stuff this month?)


The image is indeed overwhelming...to me it is just WAY to bright

Matt's idea about bringing in a contrasting color might be helpfull too.
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Jul 13th 2001#8369 Report
Member since: Mar 18th 2001
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Actually I learned typography in college. That one semester I went to it anyway... That was my favorite class. But yeah, a contrasting color would be good. Some kind of contrast. Either with color or with whitespace. (is that considered a color? I know it's considered a design element, I've seen whole books on the use of whitespace.... Anyway) But you have a good start on making interesting shapes and designs, and now just fine tune them a bit.
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Jul 13th 2001#8391 Report
Member since: May 9th 2001
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A bit busy, but I like the way you placed the text in the lighter spot. Also like the fonts and kerning...
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Jul 13th 2001#8403 Report
Member since: Jul 12th 2001
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I like it but the hard edged corners would look better if maybe faded out into white....

So it blends better with a white background but I'm not sure what you are using it for.
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Jul 13th 2001#8409 Report
Member since: Jul 12th 2001
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just another peice for my portfolio.
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Jul 13th 2001#8413 Report
Member since: Jul 4th 2001
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Very nice indeed.

Do you think you could give me a quick tutorial on that? Or if it's too much trouble, just tell me what filters you used for it.

But overall, I like you image. Just abit bright :D
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