critique...

[URL=http://www.stormi.f2s.com/tekno/index.htm][ teknophobia ][/URL]

name taken from a song by "Happy Hardcore" and they rock!!!

[URL=http://www.stormi.f2s.com/orange.GIF][ and a lil fun image when i got bored ][/URL]

Boredum gets to ya.

arrggg, hold with me, i need to upload to my other F2S account...

Awsome. I really love the way those look. On the first page, I would recomend making it just a little narrower. I have to scroll on my computer because I use a tool bar on the left. Take a look at the CSS in tsg1985.2y.net. With the code the way it is, it will not cause people to scroll, and it allows you to create an optimal version for large screens. Next, I would make the top and bottom a two pixel line instead of one. I like borders.

Second one.
*the feed your imagination is too dim for me. I have to strain to see it.
*the bottom orange line. I would take the black line directly to the coker bottle.
*orange cola could have more of a popout effect as the coca-cola on the left does.