My First Site!

I discover the power of ps some week ago, and i must say im inlove. So here my first own work of it, its only the first layout for now, so things will change. So please guys, give my your comments and tips. And remember this is not the final thing.

But here it is

http://dupa55.coolfreepage.com/

I hope you like it

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http://www.angelfire.com/weird2/kaka/index.htm

looks very good for at first job in PS!!

the loadings a bit slow though and do the text in the HTML codes instead.. no good reason for doing it in PS.. the text just gets harder and more annoying to read..

the frame a bit to beveled and you easily see that its just and effect.. but as said, im very impressed for at first job!!

Its not bad for your first attempt, like zvansen said. I think the bevel is to much, it makes it look rather unoriginal imo, but it still looks alright.

I would also recommend that you center the entire thing on the page, instead of having it over to the left side, it would just make it look better imo...

Nice work though for your first attempt... keep at it

the whole thing its self is a little big... but im jealous of your talent as a first time website. my first site looked like bad poopy stuff lol

what does kaka mean ? does it mean what I think it means ?