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Feb 18th 2003#91265 Report
Member since: Dec 24th 2002
Posts: 12
http://www.singalore.com/adrian


Just a personal portofolio site.

Need ya feedback.

Quite blank isn't it?
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Feb 18th 2003#91270 Report
Member since: Jan 4th 2003
Posts: 69
I like it so far I think it looks nice...a few things though is i dont like the font really imo...and .... u should so something with that big blank space at the top instead of just putting a grid there...thats what it makes it so blank lol...and im sure that space in the bottom right when be were news will go correct?
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Feb 18th 2003#91271 Report
Member since: Jul 6th 2002
Posts: 316
font is hard to read.... you should at least have some text links some where... although you might... i can't tell much from a jpeg
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Feb 18th 2003#91282 Report
Member since: Dec 24th 2002
Posts: 12
Brian: yup, you're right about the space to the bottom left. Good suggestion about the space on the top. Hehe, will see what I can do with my limited skill on that.

Oranjcrush: I have always been bad with fonts hehe....
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Feb 18th 2003#91286 Report
Member since: Feb 17th 2003
Posts: 2450
Cute as a template - add more stuff to it - change the font for the links or increse the distance between letters - better change the color too - white is kinda fuzzy - also just an idea - the slim bar that is inside the main area - the one not filled - use an "inside" white stroke - it's the little details that make great designs if you have sharp, pointed edges stroke it inside instead of the default outside if the stroke is bigger than 1...hope it's useful
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Feb 18th 2003#91336 Report
Member since: Feb 14th 2003
Posts: 685
yip
looks nice - keep us posted
make it full screen too, would look awesome that way

cheers
heathrowe
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Feb 19th 2003#91449 Report
Member since: Sep 6th 2001
Posts: 3893
I think that looks pretty good, the only thing that i have to say is fix the navigation.. the font is kindof bad compared to the rest of the site, which is great...

I think your off to a great start... keep us posted :D
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Feb 19th 2003#91463 Report
Member since: May 1st 2002
Posts: 3034
yeah I think the font needs a bit of work too, maybe just add some stroke to it or something :\ just to add a lil contrast.
but other than that I thinks its really nice maybe have a little less empty space at the top...
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Feb 19th 2003#91477 Report
Member since: Jul 23rd 2001
Posts: 371
hey adrian,

a couple of things can be worked on --
1)the pic needs to be moved up (get rid of some dead space)
2)change the font for 'c3uc3' it looks weird..
3)get rid of the '0111001010001110101', maby put a light trans grey bar or something..
4)girls are always a plus, but i would get rid of the ghosted double near the illegible white pixel text.. which also doesn't need to be there..
5)Change the content box to square.. and get rid of the bars inside it..
6)change the content box bg to a darker color.. (give depth)
7)add a 1px horiz. line between the bottom contact bar and the rest of the site..


hope that helps ya!!

mod edit : NO SPAMMING!
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Feb 19th 2003#91496 Report
Member since: Aug 7th 2002
Posts: 355
i like c3uc33's font more than yours syber.... but the font still needs work
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