motion - feedback

ayup all, i read here alot, first time poster tho.

made this today at college, i know, i know, its shockwave, its cus i was in shockwave lesson =)

anywway here it is..

http://www33.brinkster.com/motionsickness/

very new to the web-design scene.. thats why its a bit blunt.

honest feedback plz

I really like where its goin, i think that it could be expanded a bit. I also think it looks quite strange that the shockwave part has nice flowing wavey design then it just stops at the background color. I also think that the shockwave plugin should be centered in the window. It may be on your screen but on my 19" 1024x768 screen it slightly to the right. Other wise i like the design

thx for info, yeah understand what ya mean with the ''stopping to background'' thing. ill play around see what comes up. any ideas wud go down a treat.

-motion

maybe make it 3 times wider. giving extra room for content? i like small, but its gunna be crammy after a while, to many page flicks i feel. watcha think?

well could you make the background as an extention of whats goin on in the shockwave? like match the image up so it would continue but only the little shockwave part would flick when you change page?

yeah, ill give it a go, at college today so ill post later with what t looks like,

cyas

just a little reminder..

remember youre http:// in front of your links

I think it looks alright, but like Mi Lo Fu said... it is really small and off centered... i think if you made it bigger and centered it better... and pick a WAY better font to use, I think it would look alright... :D

shhhhh nobody will ever know.

yeah i do stupid things like that often, thanks for the heads up =)

ive actually ditched that idea all together, made a whole new one ill post it later when i get home.

-motion

i ditched the old one, new ones up n running, any input wud be lovely