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Jun 29th 2001 | #7050 Report |
Member since: Jun 11th 2001 Posts: 67 |
I was in a bad mood when I made this.. It's my first attempt at the dark / grunge look really. I added in a quote from God Emporer of Dune to spice it up a bit and add some brightness. What do you guys think? edit: oops forgot the link: Slavery.jpg |
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Jun 29th 2001 | #7055 Report |
Member since: Mar 27th 2001 Posts: 2237 |
I like the feeling it gives... Its really works on a dark background.....on the white background it is decieving. It is a whole lot better than it appears on that page. I'm not sure a little something in the dark area on the bottom to kinda offset it, wouldn't work nicely. |
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Jun 29th 2001 | #7056 Report |
Member since: Jun 11th 2001 Posts: 67 |
Technically it's not on a page at all so the background to the image is just your color scheme, I linked directly to the image but I suppose it would have been wiser for me to put it on a page w/ a black background.
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Jun 29th 2001 | #7057 Report |
Member since: Mar 24th 2001 Posts: 3734 |
I'd have to agree with torn here. I think you could add a little somethin' to that bottom right corner. Maybe something about a 50% opacity just to kind of symmetrize it a bit more. The left side seems much heavier than the right. And lets not get into a dictionary argument again. I don't know and I don't care whether or not symmetrize is a word. But you all know what I mean. |
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Jun 29th 2001 | #7064 Report |
Member since: May 28th 2001 Posts: 365 |
Nice work! I generally like the grunge-ish dark look of art, and two of my friends are gods at it. I think it looks nice, a very valiant and good looking first attempt. And I'm going to go geekish dictionary mode...isnt persuit spelled, "pursuit"?
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Jun 29th 2001 | #7067 Report |
Member since: Mar 24th 2001 Posts: 3734 |
Sure is D
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Jun 29th 2001 | #7071 Report |
Member since: Jun 11th 2001 Posts: 67 |
I lightened up the corner a bit: here any better?
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Jun 29th 2001 | #7137 Report |
Member since: May 9th 2001 Posts: 399 |
Cool. I like it. I had a hard time reading "......Path to". Looks cool. Oh, BTW Did anyone say how cool your sig is? If not, I thinks it's awesome. |
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