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Organic Tragedy (sorry about last night)

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Jan 20th 2003#86626 Report
Member since: Jan 20th 2003
Posts: 27
Hey guys well last night tripod decided to let me know that my site had exceeded bandwidth. :mad: SORRY, thats the reason for the double post, but anyway please visit my site and let me know what you think!


Check it out here ORGANIC TRAGEDY
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Jan 20th 2003#86634 Report
Member since: Mar 20th 2001
Posts: 3367
The header is pretty cool, but it doesn't work with white as the background. Something dark should work. Not sure if you've seen Endopod's previous organic design.

http://home.phong.com/ .. Register yourself and set the theme to Pod's
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Jan 20th 2003#86685 Report
Member since: Jan 20th 2003
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Excuse me? Who is POD? And i truly hope you are NOT critising me of copying any designs.....because this came from my own head.......that would not be fair because this is my own idea....
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Jan 20th 2003#86689 Report
Member since: Nov 26th 2001
Posts: 2586
Originally posted by sidez
Something dark should work. Not sure if you've seen Endopod's previous organic design.


Relax Org.... Read a little what he is saying....
He is trying to get you to see POD's version of this site to see what the vine can look like against a black background.

I would agree with Sidez. I think the header looks great, but it doesnt compare with the rest of the site. The site is too simple and basic compared to the header.

I like the fonts for the nav, but I also dont. It looks too scripty for my tastes, but I like the idea of them being part of the vine.

Cheers.
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Jan 20th 2003#86697 Report
Member since: Jan 16th 2003
Posts: 236
Yuh... Dont ask for a critique if your going to spaz out.
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Jan 20th 2003#86712 Report
Member since: Jan 20th 2003
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hey sorry guys, i thought he was saying thati stole someones design. Lol i jsut got done reading the RIPS page so i think that it was on my mind....sorry about that. My apologies. Anyway thanks for the advice.
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Jan 20th 2003#86714 Report
Member since: Nov 26th 2001
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Np =) I kind of figured you read it wrong....
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Jan 21st 2003#86803 Report
Member since: Aug 12th 2001
Posts: 279
I love the bug, and I like the vine. What I don't like is seeing "Welcome to a Tripod Member page" pop up everytime I click on something. But I know that can't always be avoided....;)

I agree you need to do a little more with the bottom half of your site. And I also like your header font, but at the same time it's not real readable and doesn't stand out. Any other slightly scripty font that could still attach to the vine without being as squiggly might be nice. Or maybe highlight it from behind.

Overall, I like nav design, it looks great, and you've got some nice work in your gallery.

Hmm, you're my age, similar interests, and you kinda look like me. I'm scared........you must be my evil twin brother I never knew.......
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Jan 21st 2003#86824 Report
Member since: Jan 20th 2003
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haha, i think i am your evil twin.....well im not all evil...maybe just a twin. I have been told numerous times about the font, heh i think its just readable to me because i made it. But ill look into it. Thanks a lot. Yeah sorry about the pop-ups, you just cant find decent free hosts anymore. But thanks you for yoru advice and comments its really appreciated!!!!!!!

-Ryan
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Jan 22nd 2003#86918 Report
Member since: Sep 6th 2001
Posts: 3893
Well it looks alright, but i think you need to slice that image up some, it would really cut down on the file size and loading time... and it kindof looks like the image was squished alot vertically, not sure if it is supost to be like that or not... i just think it makes it look bad :p...

Just my opinion though :/
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