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Dec 26th 2002 | #83333 Report |
Member since: Jul 17th 2002 Posts: 215 |
heres my latest company site version http://www.femultimedia.com/v2/index.htm anybody got some crits? thanks! |
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Dec 26th 2002 | #83334 Report |
Member since: Mar 20th 2001 Posts: 3367 |
My eyes hurt just looking at those bevels, and I'm serious
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Dec 26th 2002 | #83335 Report |
Member since: Jul 17th 2002 Posts: 215 |
is that good or bad? :confused:
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Dec 26th 2002 | #83338 Report |
Member since: Jun 16th 2002 Posts: 1391 |
There are just too many of 'em.
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Dec 26th 2002 | #83353 Report |
Member since: Apr 20th 2002 Posts: 3000 |
Hurt is usually a bad thing. :] There's one thing that bothers me. I'm having trouble accepting the word you used for your team link, "Enigma." Unless you want to convince your clients that your group is surrounded by mystery and will confuse them to heck. And yeah, the bevels should be toned down. :] |
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Dec 26th 2002 | #83359 Report |
Member since: Mar 18th 2001 Posts: 6632 |
The bevels are quite over done. The colors are kinda boring. "professional" i guess, but that doesn't mean they have to be boring. The fonts are boring too. Impact in the navigation and so forth... And in your client work, the flash based text is anti-aliased which makes it look all blurry and hard to read. in the portfolio section, you have a bulleted list, but then you right aligned everything. Do one or the other. There is no sense in doing both. The odd spacing on the left makes it look really bad. Either left align with bullets, or right align with no bullets. There is a lot of --- scattered all over the place. Why? In your digital art section it says "standby". Does that mean I should wait a few seconds for the images to load, or come back in 3 months when you've put stuff online? I really hope your Philosophy is a joke or just filler text... Because it makes no sense whatsoever. Using big meaningless words does not make you look professional. It makes it look like you wanted to look more professional, so you sat down with a thesaurus and a dictionary and wrote your Philosophy. Just use well written every day english. I wouldn't put your pictures or birthdays on your professional site. People will automatically be hesitant to work with you when they see how young you are. Most people know that young people are good with computers, but a 60 year old business owner isn't going to care. He's looking for professionalism, price, and when it can be done over how cool the flash is. Give a reason to join your mailing list... Discounts, news, anything. Tell people you won't spam them. Let them know how many times a month they will receive a mailing. Tell them what the newsletters contain. Give them some valuable information to help grow their business and their web site. Show them how to unsubscribe. |
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Dec 26th 2002 | #83370 Report |
Member since: Jul 17th 2002 Posts: 215 |
wow very good information, i truly appreciate it guys. ill c what i can do thanks again
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