need opinions

which do you like better my current site

http://hyperprinting.net

or the new one I'm working on, also do you like the new one better with or without the tiles?

http://hyperprinting.net/new/index2.html

thanks I appreciate any tips or constructive criticism

third attempt

number 3

They're both very filter-tastic.
Try to avoid filters, and those feathered borders too.
The font is awful too, use something more professional, like verdana, or maybe arial black?

Skip the bevels, the lensflares and try making stuff just as big as it has to..

My two cents. :p

i agree with paavo, although i do think the new one is much better.

The new version is DEFINITELY better.

One thing is, it's HUGE, and I'm at 1152 x 864. I would work with the banner a bit, make it SMALLER, add more to it, make it sleeker.

I like the improvements you made. Also, I didn't see any tiles, so I don't have anything to say about that. ;)

Another note: I didn't know what the site was for because my eyes avoided the big block of text and looked at the pictures. They just didn't want to read it for some reason. So try working with the font and placement of text to make it less intimidating and in an easy-to-read place.

Nice work, good luck with it,

cablemotion

Yeah i think paavo and cablemotion pretty much said everthing i was going to say.... try not to use as much filters, lens flares, and the conent and everything else on the new one is really really big...

Keep working on it though..

fonts is the only thing i dont like about it.

Thanks alot everyone, I took everyone's advice and worked on it some more. here is my third attempt. please tell me what you think.

http://hyperprinting.net/hypersite/index.html

It's the best of the three so far in my opinion.. Only real dislike is the shade of blue used for the title.. Perhaps a greyish colour would look better?

I think it looks good other then the blue color like King troll said...

Another thing that i think should be worked on is... make a border around the content or something, something to kindof tie everything together... so that the top isnt just floating there... :p

Other then that i think its alot better then the other ones... :D

Originally posted by PaavoPerkele
They're both very filter-tastic.
Try to avoid filters, and those feathered borders too.
The font is awful too, use something more professional, like verdana, or maybe arial black?

Skip the bevels, the lensflares and try making stuff just as big as it has to..

My two cents. :p

What he said. ^^^^^