check my another new site plz

please give me some advice, thanx

http://mzhang.topcities.com/

well first off on the splash page, it took me 5 clicks to finally find the right place where to click to enter your site. so probably want to make the whole pic a link or put enter or something. and about your site. it seems that you wanted to use everything you knew how to do and put it all on one page. which isnt always the best thing to do. right now i think the home page link background is much too dark and really doesnt have anything to do with the rest of the site, as i can see the about me link has a different background that does go with the rest of the site. So i would change the homepage bg to the same as the others, so they match and it will be a lot easier to read the text. keeping a basic theme on websites is always good. And i am getting the impression that you wanted a medieval look/castle look, which is pretty good with the wood and tile stone look as the background but then when you roll over the links they turn into a basic blue to gold gradient (fake chrome), which kinda throws the theme that you are trying to keep. i would recommend not having the rollover or atleast changing it to something old, or dark stone... some color or texture that would work better with your theme. I know you are trying to show all your skill in one big clump but i think that isnt always a good thing for a site. I think showing all your knowledge and skills in your portfolio pieces/gallery is a much better place. People will still see that you know how to do all these fancy things while still having a nice site to look at. Anyway your site is a great start, with a few little fixes i think it can be better and end up looking pretty nice. sorry for the long message, just trying to help.

thanx a lot, redeye , yeah, u really got sharp eyes

Is that CUNY York College or the one in Pennsylvania?

It also looks more professional if you spell words right ;)

Re:Is that CUNY York College or the one in Pennsylvania?

no, it is in Canada, Toronto city

Mmm, Canada, I see. Just when I thought there was another resident New Yorker. :p:p