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portfolio/personal web site

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Oct 27th 2002#75579 Report
Member since: Sep 6th 2001
Posts: 3893
it looks pretty good man... welcome to the board...

any relation to the jackson 5?... jk :D
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Oct 31st 2002#76325 Report
Member since: Oct 23rd 2002
Posts: 6
ha ha! sorry no relation
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Nov 2nd 2002#76644 Report
Member since: Feb 12th 2002
Posts: 271
looks good. you misspelled coming as comming tho in the coming soon thing. just thought yuo'd wanna know.
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Nov 3rd 2002#76696 Report
Member since: Sep 29th 2002
Posts: 236
thats pretty cool, GO CANADA!!
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Nov 3rd 2002#76742 Report
Member since: Nov 3rd 2002
Posts: 21
Different.. and different is good

but..

· I noticed a few spelling errors

· The fonts dont match (the music fonts, and the handwriting)

· The location of the music control makes it stand out as if its the main part of the site

· A better mixture of colors would definitally make the site look alot more proffessional

· All the triangles you've used at the top are neat, but theres to many if i must say

· Maybe try not to mimic sides so much, it looks like you flipped left side and put it on the right.

· The site doesnt really have a theme.. It's a bit techy, and a bit softer.. if you picked one or the other, and had everything flow with it that'd be better.
eg)
- The soft music, and hand writing font go together
- The strong triangles, thick lines that connect pieces go together and the headers for the news bar.

· The canadian flag should be moved, or just blended a little bit better

· The Grey backround, doesn't fit well with the News

If you fixed up these small errors, your site would turn out looking clean cut and proffessional


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A few good things you did

· The scripting was excellent, all the preloaders work great
· The layout for the news is well kept in that scroll bar
· A great logo
· Reliable music control
· The portfolio is filled with great animations
· The actual content is easily accessable (which is the most important)
· The splash page (enter page) is done very well
· The thought behind this has obviously been very well thought out

Overall a good outcome
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