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Oct 22nd 2002#74787 Report
Member since: Oct 22nd 2002
Posts: 1
hey guys this is my first true website. i followed a tutorial over at carbon four. i know it sucks, but could you guys please give me some constructive criticism? thanks a lot, it really means a lot to me.

http://cog.ath.cx/~howard
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Oct 23rd 2002#74902 Report
Member since: Sep 6th 2001
Posts: 3893
I think it looks pretty good, the colors are kinda dull, but the random top images, make up for the lack of color... so i think overall its pretty good... might want to spice up the content area a little though....

I like the random images too :D
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Oct 23rd 2002#74976 Report
Member since: Mar 24th 2002
Posts: 3114
I'd like to see borders on the sides of the site, and make a footer..I hate when you think that it doesn't perhaps end there... You know?

And I'd put some kind of backgrounds on the buttons, they seem to fade a bit into the random images..

Otherwise it's a hell of a site for being a first one!!
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Oct 23rd 2002#75076 Report
Member since: Aug 12th 2002
Posts: 1693
Yeah I really like it!!!
And the same as Paavo...
I wanted to scroll down the whole page and then I got that it was just the middle part...which is a nice thing but u can't really see which is the main fram and what is the bg...
But as I said...Nice work
And I like your splash page...simple and cool...and those small dots flying around...they r pretty qute
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Oct 23rd 2002#75081 Report
Member since: Oct 9th 2001
Posts: 426
Your page rocks... really well done,... Keep up the great work friend.
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Oct 24th 2002#75110 Report
Member since: Apr 9th 2002
Posts: 285
For the first time....I'd say you did a spectacular job...Keep up the good work
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Oct 24th 2002#75191 Report
Member since: Apr 24th 2002
Posts: 901
i love the splash and the rest is pretty good and cool too!
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Oct 24th 2002#75206 Report
Member since: Apr 20th 2002
Posts: 3000
I agree with the above comments, but (yeah, there is always a 'but' ;)), there is one thing that bothers me is that you don't necessarily need flash for that navigation.

You can make simple rollovers with a transparent background, then put them into a cell where you can lower the opacity of it, and just place it over the random image. Then again, if you really want to use Flash for it, be my guest, I'm not going to impose what I think onto someone else right now.
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