1st Flash Site

Check my site...its not done yet but its in a good stage for me to get comments on
http://arbel-designs.tripod.com

Idan Arbel

There are some aspects to this that I really like - The blue treatment - the desert or sand dune or whatever it is .. very nice- the fade works well

Criticisms .. The fonts! OMG think again thats all i can say!
although I like the interface flash element - I'm not sure about the line of circles though - some work needed there i think.

Not bad at all! I like the dot animations...all in all me likes!!

SPELLING!!!!!!! You really need to use a spell check on it and check the grammar too. Other than that it's not bad.

I'm sorry about the spelling, i'm not a native english speaker and i hadn't spell proofed the site yes seeing as it isn't completly done yet, but thanks.
Can you suggest any fonts you think could fit ?
Idan Arbel

For a GREAT site on excellent fonts go to http://www.geocities.com/infodell/fontsgam.html and pick out your own font. just make sure to email the makers of the font asking permission to use their font, and describe what you'll be using their font for. I did, and everyone was thouroughly impressed by the way I honestly asked. Chances are if you ask they'll let you do anything with it :D

Thanks i'll take a look...I think i need help picking out a font cause as you can see i thought the fonts i used where ok...apperantly they wern't, if you tell of a good tut on fonts i'll really appreciate it.
Idan Arbel

better then mine that i never finished..

http://johanooo.tripod.com/tls.swf

its CoooooOOOoool